Wednesday, 29 April 2020

giant boy

The Giant boy

There once was a boy who was named Tyler he used to be little when he was little he got bullied because he was little he wished he was big so one day he went for a walk that day he went for a walk he fell into water and when he came out of the water he felt weird and he fainted and when he fainted he woke up in this weird house where a man lived the man had a long beard and a short Mohawk he tried to sneak out but when he tried to sneak out he opened the door and saw hips of green stuff on the grown they were trees then he screamed and looked behind him and he saw the man again but behind him so he fainted again and almost fell down on the trees but the man catches him and he woke up again with the man watching him this time and the boy asked him why are you so big and the man said cause i'm a giant and the man said that hes a giant to so he screamed  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Joe. Good to see your writing. The picture catches my attention. Unfortunately I can't see you story because it has pasted off the page. When you cut and paste from a doc you need to paste using shift ctrl v instead of ctrl v. Try editing it by cutting and pasting from the post. Would you like to be a giant?

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