Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 12 May 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Joe,
ReplyDeleteit is good to see you respond to the video and retell it in order. I can see you empathise with the girl and would also be scared of the wolves. When you are writing your retell, don't forget to add a full stop at the end of each sentence. This makes your writing easier to read and separates your ideas. What would you make an animated movie about?
Miss Hart
Good to see you posting Joe. Maybe we could work on the setting/slide 3 tomorrow. Keep up the good work.
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