Tuesday, 12 May 2020

Writing

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Joe,

    it is good to see you respond to the video and retell it in order. I can see you empathise with the girl and would also be scared of the wolves. When you are writing your retell, don't forget to add a full stop at the end of each sentence. This makes your writing easier to read and separates your ideas. What would you make an animated movie about?

    Miss Hart

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  2. Good to see you posting Joe. Maybe we could work on the setting/slide 3 tomorrow. Keep up the good work.

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